Activity 5 - Critiques

[Owen]

Dearest Sam, even if I am to die before this, I would love if mine were included since I'm gonna put in the time to do these.

[Owen]

Broderick:

I'm going to preface this by saying that I think you have the ability to be an asset to the town. let me destroy the prefacing by saying that you are a complete shithead. hunting is great and so is asking questions, but you should try being more considerate in how you approach people. being in your presence is not something that is enjoyable, therefore it makes it much more difficult to look for spies when you're making a large majority of the players feel on edge. calm down. chill out. try to be a bit more personable.

I do think you're one of the smarter players in the game, but I am not sold that your hunting has been effective. citizens can come off poorly when put under the kind of pressure you put on them and can make the same mistakes a spy would. take a step back and look more at things rather than going after people who crumble under the pressure of your questioning.

to sum things up, you need to get laid. i do however appreciate your activity level and the amount of time you've put into the game.

lastly: SUCK MY DICK

[Owen]

Hambone -
I don't feel like you've been contributing enough to the Immunity Challenges. Anytime the tribe needs you, you are never here for us. If we're going to make the final two together, you need to step things up.

In all seriousness, I feel like you're doing a solid job so far. You seem to be legitimately trying to look for spies, and though you've had some crazy theories here and there, I think it's good that you're putting your thoughts out there. One time, one of the crazy things may just be something that can be used. You're also pretty fun to have around in general, and I think you might get more jury votes than me if we can take this all the way to Final 2.

Keep being vocal and saying the things you believe in, but perhaps open up your suspects list a little bit. If Jenny is a spy, she's still got three other partners left.

[Owen]

Stephanie:

Stephanie, I personally think you're awesome. You may not always have the most logical thoughts, but you are also one of the first to recognize that. You had a really rough start to the game, but as the game as gone on it seems like you've grown on a lot of people including myself. If you're a citizen, keep doing the things that you're doing and being yourself. You seem to have a few people that won't get off your case, so if you're ever in a position where you're being mislynched, fight it even if you're going to go because you never know what things will come from it. If you're a spy, completely change up what you're doing so I can get a different read on you.

Oh, and if you ever get into it with Broderick or Dane and need a way out:

[Owen]

Claude -

Dear Claudebot, be not afraid
Of your aging wires, so very frayed
Take this as a form of flattery
Don't forget to charge your battery

You're a dynamic character in the game. Although you have been terribly wrong at times, you fight for the things you want and believe with so much conviction that it's hard not to like you. Unless you're Chance, that is.

However, with the role you have, it's of the utmost importance that you are targeting the right players. While I admire your conviction on Chance, I believe that you are once again terribly wrong. If you could put even half the energy you put into trying to get Chance out of the game on other suspects, you could be a force. Of course you shouldn't take your eye off Chance completely, but more attention on others would help quite a bit.

Keep up with the intensity, but spread it out more. Oh, and treat Gertrude right. She is a lady despite her vulgar language and terrible sexual innuendos. Don't let her do it dry, either.

[Owen]

Allan:

After "qutting" and coming back, I have enjoyed your change in attitude and new outlook on the game. That's not to say that I think you made a lot of early mistakes, because you did. Your claim to Jenny still doesn't make much sense, and I hope you realize that you probably shouldn't have done that. You also lied for no reason about a few things, which again, is something I hope you realize that you shouldn't have done. In the future, don't lie about things that don't need to be lied about. Just makes you look bad.

While it's important if you're town that you don't get imprisoned because of your role, I also think you need to start being a bit more forthcoming with things. I remember you once saying that you didn't want to make cases because you feared being imprisoned. You don't need to go all out and build a case, but put more things out there or you're not going to be of much help even with your role.

If you ever get stressed like you did earlier in the game, try to realize that criticizing others in this game is just the nature of the beast.

Pass the dutch to the left, too.

[Owen]

Dane: Unlike Harold Doogan, I happen to believe that AIM is a great thing. Perhaps it's just me, but you're one of the people that I have talked to and seen online the least. When you are online, there's a good chance that you're duking it out with someone.

You're not a Magalie-sized distraction, but your attitude can be offputting. I understand living up to your character, but unneeded confrontation isn't something that all of us in the Burg deal with. Stick to your character, but keep it light more often. It'll make you a lot more approachable. You never know who has information that could lead you onto a spy; the more approachable you are, the more information that is given to you. You really seem smart enough to understand all of this and put it to good use if you are town, so for the sake of the town winning the game, lighten up.

[Owen]

Tina:

I think you're by far the laziest and most unproductive player in the game. You don't hunt, you haven't made cases, I never see you online or talk to you. If it weren't for Rondak making up for your lack of effort, I don't know where the town would be today. Probably fucked. For a mail woman, you can't deliver anything.

Aside from that, you need an attitude adjustment. What you did to me when we were alone in the Spies8 chat was degrading. Verbal assault I can handle in doses, but to you lay your hands on me in a violent yet sexual way is completely uncalled for. I think Claude agrees that you need to be modkilled for this.

By the way, I'm completely shitting you. Keep up the good work. The only real advice I have for you is that you need to believe in your original thoughts more and stop second guessing yourself and be indecisive. You've good good reads. Stick with them.

If you're a spy, completely change up everything you're doing for me, please.

[Owen]

Cory: Don't die Imprisonment six. That's for retards.

[Owen]

Jenny: I wasn't sure what to think of you at first, and at times, actually found you to be a bit fake. After talking to you more, I don't think you're fake at all, and that you are actually legitimately playing and acting how you normally would.

I still wish you would open up more. You're great at providing information, when things happened, what happened, who said what, etc. However, that's where the issue lies -- you state facts much more than you state opinions. When you do state you're opinions, a lot of the time they're on the fence. I understand being unsure and indecisive, but you also often need to take a stance on things, otherwise you'll be extremely hard to read. If you are town, the harder you are to read, the more likely you are to be mislynched at some point.

I've recently seen a bit more personality from you and I've really enjoyed it. Keep going with that and I think others that haven't warmed up to you yet will.

[Owen]

MARY-