Critical thoughts
Jul 15, 2010 19:32:33 GMT -6
Post by Zedekiah on Jul 15, 2010 19:32:33 GMT -6
I've shot at bears, wolves, fish, an' gangs. I done went an' lived in isolation for years without trouble. Almost got sent t' jail several times in the last few weeks, but now I'm seriously in trouble; this thing involves writin' up critiques, which ain't a problem I can point out how immoral a person is form dawn t' dusk, but this round I gotta write six paragraphs coherent 'nough t' not incriminate me. 
Broderick
You are honestly quite good for this game, the constant barrage of questions clarify any lies to a great degree. However if people feel you are coming across as too abrasive, you may try to work your questions into a conversation, not only does it keep a conversation going longer, but it causes some people to let down their guard, allowing you to potentially find more information. As the Idiom goes “You can catch more flies with honey than with vinegar”, and who is more on the fly than spies?
Jenny
In one way you have provided plenty of evidence, you bring enlightenment to us with every secret you unveil. But if I were to say you could improve in a crucial aspect, it would be the way you use your knowledge. Knowing Savannah’s role after it is far too late to save her? Not really quite as helpful as going out there and putting up a counter case in the first place. The evidence you use always has a time and place, if you are a citizen and this evidence can help our cause this time is usually ASAP. Don’t worry so much about the info falling into the wrong hands; if you share with everyone there is nothing the spies can do to stop it.
Hambone
If you are going to tunnel someone, be sure to update a case as information becomes available. Always be vigilant and seek out the opinions on your suspect in every matter, time goes on, every bit will eventually allow you a move in the right direction. Of course if you are able to do this with everyone it will only turn out all the better in seeing the big picture and catching more spies.
Stephanie
You are such a strong player; the unwaveringness of your morality is a rare thing these days. On the other hand such a stiff point of view occasionally allows one to miss the entire picture. I believe you to be one to hold on with all your might to every soupçon, in every meaning of the word. While you do follow up on your cases, perhaps you need to accept some things as a weak link in your chain to the spy’s shackles; find better evidence as you go along and make the case stronger as a whole.
Owen
As hard as it is to critique a perfect cit, especially one who rules the country and has become a superhero. I must say not to keep too much distance from your humble servants; we would appreciate the senate’s guidance in these matters, and of course if the senate built cases along with the house it gives multiple points of view in which to find spies. You have most likely found out much in your poll, but this machine cannot work if you do not dictate.
Jasmine
Your play seems to create some fun for people, but if I were to criticize it I would say that you need to elaborate your suspicions more, ask yourself, and more importantly your suspect; how exactly does this fit together? We all can’t see logic from chat logs and events alone, so be sure to show some comparative evidence and explain specific details of why it is bothersome. Also while playing for fun is important, be sure your entire conversation isn’t uninvolved with the game.
Broderick
You are honestly quite good for this game, the constant barrage of questions clarify any lies to a great degree. However if people feel you are coming across as too abrasive, you may try to work your questions into a conversation, not only does it keep a conversation going longer, but it causes some people to let down their guard, allowing you to potentially find more information. As the Idiom goes “You can catch more flies with honey than with vinegar”, and who is more on the fly than spies?
Jenny
In one way you have provided plenty of evidence, you bring enlightenment to us with every secret you unveil. But if I were to say you could improve in a crucial aspect, it would be the way you use your knowledge. Knowing Savannah’s role after it is far too late to save her? Not really quite as helpful as going out there and putting up a counter case in the first place. The evidence you use always has a time and place, if you are a citizen and this evidence can help our cause this time is usually ASAP. Don’t worry so much about the info falling into the wrong hands; if you share with everyone there is nothing the spies can do to stop it.
Hambone
If you are going to tunnel someone, be sure to update a case as information becomes available. Always be vigilant and seek out the opinions on your suspect in every matter, time goes on, every bit will eventually allow you a move in the right direction. Of course if you are able to do this with everyone it will only turn out all the better in seeing the big picture and catching more spies.
Stephanie
You are such a strong player; the unwaveringness of your morality is a rare thing these days. On the other hand such a stiff point of view occasionally allows one to miss the entire picture. I believe you to be one to hold on with all your might to every soupçon, in every meaning of the word. While you do follow up on your cases, perhaps you need to accept some things as a weak link in your chain to the spy’s shackles; find better evidence as you go along and make the case stronger as a whole.
Owen
As hard as it is to critique a perfect cit, especially one who rules the country and has become a superhero. I must say not to keep too much distance from your humble servants; we would appreciate the senate’s guidance in these matters, and of course if the senate built cases along with the house it gives multiple points of view in which to find spies. You have most likely found out much in your poll, but this machine cannot work if you do not dictate.
Jasmine
Your play seems to create some fun for people, but if I were to criticize it I would say that you need to elaborate your suspicions more, ask yourself, and more importantly your suspect; how exactly does this fit together? We all can’t see logic from chat logs and events alone, so be sure to show some comparative evidence and explain specific details of why it is bothersome. Also while playing for fun is important, be sure your entire conversation isn’t uninvolved with the game.