Gertrude's Critiques

[tonisha]

Hey lady. Kudos on actually finding a suspect of your own this time around, ja? No more following in people's footsteps for you! Next time, though, maybe you'll take on someone who's actually around to defend themselves. I think you can handle a bit more of a challenge than some geeky SGA dork who thinks he's an elf and is probably out raping nubile elven women.

[tonisha]

Game play thus far, what game play? If you are a citizen, you should step up your game and activity. If A spy, you should probably self-exile yourself out.
Show up. There are schedule conflicts, however as a Citizen ( if you are one), you should try to make the most out of your limited time.

[tonisha]

It is now a month into this game and I know nothing about you except for the few people you seem not to like that much. You just recently have started making a case on Rondak, which is nice, but could be expanded upon. I am not one to like chat log cases as much as someone explaining a point, supplemented with chat logs.

You need to get more vocal and make a few good stances in this game. The ability is there, just take the time to contribute to the burg in depth.

[tonisha]

gertrude,

my cat urbit got one whiff of you and he knows you're a citizen. i can tell because he peed himself, which he only did near citizens last year.

i know bandwagoning and you're one of the best. it's better than being a lurker like me. you can be more social but you're doing ok so far. come up with more excuses to explain your bad suspicions and use more variety kthx. you've been tryinggg to do a subtle newbie act, which is obviously fake cause you do that like every game. so just realize it wont help you anymore and now you have to actually start getting in the swing of things.

you'll be amazing, they'll see. well, they might need to close their eyes a lil bit.

don't be a wussy, be a pussy.

love, kathie

[tonisha]

gertrood lik i meen if u rly lik bandwagon y dont u go play organ trale or sumtink i meen lol srsyl ders mor 2 diz gam den livn 2 da end n gess wut evn if u liv a lonng tim ull stil get impd if u dont find da fukn spy

so my advize iz 2 hellp mor or if ur a spy wle lol ur doin a god job cuz i forget bout u sumtim

[tonisha]

The Red Sox suck. I don't know why I just said that. So could you explain to me why your explanation for early round actions is that you're used to Survivor games, but now that it's mid-game, you're still behaving more or less exactly like you were at he beginning of the game? Clearly there's something more to the picture here than what meets the eye.
You seem to wagon. A lot. And you rarely have good reasons beyond what other people say before you. Why? If you're a Citizen, then please start coming out with stuff on your own. Start writing cases up on people, trying something new. Step outside the box of sitting back and watching people. Clearly you're capable of doing so, so, please, do it!